I recorded by own commentary on the film including what i thought of it and how my overall opinion on the film. I have added this to the video to allow it to play on a loop. Here is the link to it.
http://vimeo.com/22601530

Firstly the use of the camera which I have learnt how to use skillfully to produce a good quality shot. The camera helped us to shoot all the shots in the opening scene. I learnt how to use the zoom in and zoom out in a smooth way so it didnt jerk. I always used a 3 seccond gap before and after the shot to make it easier when it came ot editing the film so that parts of the shot were not missed out and reshooting would have to be done. I also learnt how to use the audio on the camera which helped me to record my commentry and make it clear enough to fit into the film. The camera however at the start was causing problems with the brightnesss in the shots as we shot it in very bright sun and this did not suit the camera to make a clear shot. From this I have learnt that the camera needs to be very advanced in order for the film to be clear and steady, the quality of colour and brightness also need to be looked at in a camera before shooting a film. Along with the camera a tripod was used for the film. I have learnt how to use the tripod such as the camera sercurly on it and how to position it so brings a good picture. The tripod wasn't used in our first attempt as the film and this is the reason we reshot because it was jerrky and shaky. However when using the tripod it did cause some probles in Adobe premier when editing such as the noises of the click on the zoom buttton when zooming in and out. Also as the gilr walks at the strart the street was steep and the tripod couldn't be pointed higher for girl to to be seen in the shot. This delayed day 1 of the reshoot. This film will attract or adresss the primary audience being teenagers and secondary audience being paents of teenagers.
Firstly from the use of titles and credits having a glowing and bright effect clearly is emphasised on the black background. This makes the titles and credits stand out making them more noticable to the audience and keeping them interested. The titles and credits also meeting the conventions of the real media products with this sort of genres shows a dark and mysterious style to them. Especially the title which comes after the girl takes a overdose has a big affect on keeping the audeince attracted to the film as it is a cliffhangers as they find out what happens to the girl. The titlese and credits have a very modern looke relating to teenagers and with the gloing effect it represents normally a club sign relating to the primary audience.
Secondly the within in the first shot the audeince establish the young teenager girl walking from the school by herself. This is a aspect of the film which allows the primary audience mainly relate to as the teenager is repreesented, contracting the typical representation of teens in films. This is therefore attracting the audience as it is something they can connect to.
Next the use of dark and depressing music immediately constrasts the genre of the film being depression, bullying and overdose. The music builds up when the ghostly figure is reviled and when the girl is running, this builds up tension and suspense and the audience is attarcted to the film as it beomes as they wonder why this girl is runnign from the ghostly figure. The ghostly figure is big part in making the audience stay interest and attract them to further watch beccause not many films have this sort of issue where a teen is troubled by a ghost and therefore this is very unique film.